This is done very well. She's sexy and provocative, but not in a outright ridiculous way. She's classy sexy, and that's very good. Her shape and hair remind me of Cortana, as if this is what she'd look like if she wasn't digital. And here, she's actually useful. Cyborg body is very well thought out, but just one question: where does the sword go when she's not using it?
This girl's face has a personality to it that doesn't really fit Rei. Her posture gives her an attitude like, "yeah, I'm badass. You know it, and I know you like it." Rei doesn't really have emotions, and when she shows them, she's always timid about it. Asuka is the one who acts like she's all that, even though she isn't at all. If only Rei acted like this...I agree that the blood red eyes would have made this picture even better than it is.